How to Write Conflict into Dialogue
How to Use Dialogue to Build Tension and Conflict in Your Story
Dialogue is more than just a way for characters to communicate—it’s a powerful tool that can transform the emotional core of your story.
When used effectively, dialogue can show the complexity of relationships, fuel the plot with conflict, and reveal hidden motivations.
Whether you’re writing a paranormal adventure or a supernatural thriller, the way your characters interact with words can make all the difference.
If you’re looking to craft dialogue that crackles with tension, here’s a guide to help you create conversations that keep readers on edge.
Create Conflicting Objectives
The root of all good conflict is a clash of desires, and dialogue is the perfect place to show it.
For every character, there should be something they want—and often, they want different things.
When two characters are at odds over their goals, even a simple exchange can turn into a heated debate.
Imagine a scene in a supernatural romance where one character is trying to convince the other to take a dangerous path, while the other wants nothing more than to protect them from harm.
The friction between their conflicting desires will make their conversation full of energy, no matter what they’re actually saying.
Subtext: The Unspoken Layer
Not everything needs to be directly stated.
Often, the true conflict is what’s not being said.
Subtext—the underlying tension that lurks beneath the words—is what makes a conversation feel real and charged.
Characters might say one thing but mean another, or their words might reveal more than they intend.
In a tense moment, characters may discuss mundane things, like the weather or daily routines, but underneath the surface, there’s a simmering anger, longing, or betrayal that gives the conversation an entirely different feel.
By paying attention to what’s left unsaid, you can give your dialogue more depth and intrigue.
Play with Pace to Build Tension
The pacing of your dialogue is another way to inject conflict.
Fast-paced, rapid exchanges can create a sense of urgency or anger, while slower, more drawn-out pauses can increase suspense or discomfort.
By varying the speed of conversations, you can mirror the emotional shifts happening within the scene.
For instance, a character who is holding back anger might initially lash out with quick, sharp responses, followed by long pauses as they collect their thoughts.
The tension grows as the silence stretches out, leaving the reader anticipating the next emotional outburst.
These moments can be as telling as the words themselves.
Add Emotional Layering Through Word Choice
The words your characters choose can say a lot about what’s really going on inside.
A character may say one thing, but their tone, choice of words, or even their silence can reveal far more about their emotional state.
By carefully selecting the right dialogue to fit the situation, you add layers to the conversation that make the conflict more palpable.
For example, a character who is heartbroken but trying to stay calm might say, “I’m fine,” even as their voice cracks.
In that one short sentence, the contrast between what they say and how they feel adds complexity to their character and the conversation itself.
Need Help Creating Tension-Filled Dialogue?
If you want to learn how to bring even more energy to your dialogue, check out The Step-By-Step Beginners Guide to Writing a YA Fiction Novel – Crafting Distinctive Conversations and Dialogue
It’s packed with exercises and strategies to help you shape conversations that are authentic, challenge your characters, and keep your readers hooked.
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While dialogue is a fantastic way to build tension, it’s just one tool in your storytelling toolbox.
If you want to explore how to create unforgettable characters, plot twists, or supernatural worlds, my website has plenty of other resources to help you develop your craft.
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Also, be sure to check out my novels to see how I use dialogue to bring tension to life in my stories.
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